雅思作文中学生常见的错误

1. 词汇用法不当

Traditional knowledge does have significant impact on one’s temperament and characterpermanently.

Students can catch up applicable skills, such as computer-operation.

Culture, in a way, is deepened by religion.

I think the main point is to make sure that young children do not overuse computers.

Mixed marriage allows us to admit our own culture deeply and simultaneously understand each other, which become the inner driving force behind the relationship. 

And children in those families also inherently be given a bilingual surrounding, which gives them rights in language study. 

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2. 主谓不一致

Mixed marriage allows us to admit our own culture deeply and simultaneously understand each other which become the inner driving force behind the relationship. 

Cross-board marriage make the likehood of collision with two unlike people and cultures become maximum.

People who care about environment often does garbage category.

Building a lot of sports facilities do help to exercise, because the people who may not want to do some exercise for the place with sports facilities is far away from their homenow can do some sports in a park with a number of facilities near their home.

3. 从句运用不当

The crude oil and gold price that are becoming more and more important in the world economic system.
 
      The most concerned questions between them how much money they prepared for  supporting their kids?

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4. 搭配不当

However, this measure may useless for the persons who need to work hard from Monday to Friday, since these guys would like stay at home to have a rest rather than to go outside to do some exercises.

Government can improve their education about health encourage people to have balanced diets which are very important of their health, and individuals also need to change their minds for health.  

5. Fragment 不是完整句子

Government should investment more funds into infrastructure.  Where is Verb?

Establishing a new restaurant in foreign country will challenges because different countries have different cultures.

I tend to agree that young children can be negatively by too much time spent on the computer every day.  缺动词